This is an Interesting glimpse of a 17-18 year old young man's insight and perspectives into his daily life, attitudes and outlook upon society.
But it lacks depth, definition and who he really is. He sounds gay (this is not a criticism!), and if he is, this could be a fascinating audio blog. This is just 1 example though. He could better define himself with a brief intro... 'my name is ---, I'm a senior at --- and I'm into lacrosse, swimming and my cat, Noodles.' Details that provide a better understanding of who we're listening too.
The quality is fine, just keep doing them! I'm enouraged!