Not that there is not some information here---it is just agonizingly slow to reach. Write for the Web. Too much "you know what I mean?", "Does that make sense?" If a podcaster or presenter knows that s/he is wordy, work with an outline, work with a coach as you suggest! What is the point of having a moderator if that person does not keep you on track? Condense or die on the web, it is just that simple.